I have the pleasure of sharing a guest post by author Nanette Littlestone, who muses on...
How Bad Can It Get?
by
Nanette Littlestone
I
was forty-one when my writing muse (aka Spirit) first whispered to me and I was
also single and a little desperate. Where was that knight in shining armor?
When was I going to get rescued and carried off into the sunset? How long did I
have to wait?
When
you don’t have romance in your life, you make do with second best. Books about
romance. I devoured them, all kinds, and fantasized about that perfect man. So
when I started to write, of course I wanted to write romance. It seemed simple.
Boy meets girl, boy gets girl, boy loses girl over some ridiculous
misunderstanding, then they make up and, in the end, boy gets girl once again.
But it wasn’t as easy as I thought.
Just because I read romance didn’t mean I could write it. My story lines were
too simplistic and my characters were weak, flimsy, unambitious, and
unmotivated. All they cared about was eating, sleeping, and falling in love. Sadly,
there’s a lot more to it than that.
Help came in the form of an online
class on plotting. The teacher gave us a GMC chart (Goal, Motivation, and
Conflict) and told us to fill it out. We had to define our character’s role,
their default behavior, inner motivation, outer goal, inner goal, outer
conflict, and inner conflict. As a bonus she added a column for “what would the
character never do.” So I filled out my chart but I didn’t feel any closer to
creating strong characters and/or a strong story line. When I asked for help the
teacher said, “Use the character’s default behavior to create conflict.” Say
what? I knew my two main characters would fall in love, but I didn’t know how
to get them there or what happened after the fact.
Throughout the class I pondered the
statement about using the character’s default to create conflict. I so wanted
to understand but I just didn’t get it. The last day of the class another
student raised the same question I had and the teacher gave the same response.
But this time the lightning bolt struck and illuminated my brain. Eureka, I
understood!
So who were my characters and what
did they want? Toscana has a comfortable marriage with a good, kind man. But
her heart longs for more. In her dreams and with Flynn she feels the
possibilities of that desire grow into something tangible, something exciting,
something breathtaking. But to follow her heart means taking risks, suffering
consequences, possibly hurting the people she loves. How can she do that?
Suddenly conflict blossomed and
spread throughout my story. The characters deepened and carried emotional
flaws. Their choices created far-reaching consequences that not only had the
potential to harm them but also harm others.
Since that class, GMC has become
the powerhouse behind every story line. With GMC I identify not only the
exterior goal and conflict (usually the villain) but also the emotional heart
of the characters—their needs
and fears. The basic beliefs and patterns that we all share. We may live under
different conditions, some in luxury, some in poverty, some with education,
some without. But we all feel heartache and joy, longing and desire, the need
to love and be loved. These universal emotions unite everyone around the
planet, and it is those emotions that make for great storytelling.
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by
Nanette
Littlestone
GENRE: Women's
Fiction
BLURB:
Disturbing
visions from an ancient past.
A
mysterious stranger that somehow feels familiar.
On the
night of her fiftieth birthday, the comfortable ride of Toscana’s life takes an
alarming plunge. Haunted by seductive visions, she tries to push aside the
desire and focus on the husband who adores her. Then she falls for Flynn, a
younger man with an eye for adventure and a heart full of romance, who leaves
her doubting everything she’s believed about love and passion.
In
Atlanta, Rome, and the lush scenery of Tuscany, Toscana searches for answers to
the mysteries of her life while she faces her biggest question. If she listens
to her feelings will she lose everything she holds dear, or does her heart hold
the key to love and joy?
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EXCERPT
I loved him before I knew him.
Some people talk of synchronicity. The rhythm of
life. I know of rhythm, in the lyricism of words, in music, in the ebb and flow
of the ocean, in the monthly cycles of plants and trees. A beautiful
orchestration exists in the simplest of nature. But my world operates on logic,
practicality, reason. I do not believe in a grand plan. I do not believe in
God.
And then he came.
Before him, I had a well-ordered life. Habit and
routine carried me through the day, warmth and comfort eased me through the
night. There were disappointments. Longings. Not all was perfect. But such is
life. If there was no great passion, so be it. Peace is preferable to something
wild that soars then fizzles and leaves you with an aching heart. I had a
different kind of love—security, respect, admiration, friendship.
He showed me my lies in a slow creep of warmth that
grew and teased and eventually began to burn. The thought of him burrowed deep
inside me until I could think of nothing but him.
To this day I don’t think he knew what would
happen. How do you know what fate has in store for you? They say man has free
will to act, to choose, to create whatever he desires. But what of other
people’s actions, choices, desires? What if those choices conflict with your
own? We tried to resist the seemingly magnetic pull. We did our best to act
rationally, to behave with honor and dignity. To be selfless. But love is not
selfless.
Love is selfish. Love craves attention. Love needs
to be heard, to be felt. Love is a natural disaster.
You may think this is nothing new. We all know
stories of love. But this story is different. This story spans over two
thousand years. This story began in ancient Rome.
So I beg you, for as long as it takes to read this
story, to put aside your beliefs. Something took hold of me, pulled me along.
Was it fate? Destiny? Divine intervention?
Look to your own heart for the answers.
Book
Buy Links:
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AUTHOR Bio and
Links:
Nanette
Littlestone never knew she wanted to be a writer until she was over forty. But
once she began, the ideas didn’t stop. Her fascination with relationships,
history, and the spiritual path has opened her writing to women's fiction,
historical fiction, and inspirational nonfiction.
A
native Californian, Nanette lives in Atlanta, Georgia, far from the beach
(which she loves) but a place that’s warm with spectacular scenery. On the
professional side, she helps entrepreneurial women write and get published with
Words of Passion. On the fun side, she takes walks with her husband, cooks,
plays with graphic design, and makes origami butterflies. She loves to travel,
but she’s waiting for the teleportation machine to whisk her off to Greece or
Asia. In the meantime, she’s happy with dark chocolate and romantic movies that
make her cry.
Author
links:
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DeleteGood morning! Thanks so much for hosting me and Bella Toscana. I'm excited to be here.
ReplyDeleteSorry to take so long to welcome you, Nanette! I've been dealing with some computer issues and as a result I'm even later than usual at everything. I hope the tour has been going well!
DeleteThe heroine in Bella Toscana has to make an enormous choice that has dangerous consequences for all concerned. Think of your favorite books. What are some of the worst choices a character had to make? How did the character find his/her way?
ReplyDeleteA lot of the time, my fave character has to make the choice between following their heart and dealing with their proscribed roles which can be confining and inhibiting. I love watching them find the courage to grow.
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DeleteI appreciate you taking the time to visit and read the post, Victoria!
DeleteAre any of the people in the book based on real people? I hope your book is a success. Bernie Wallace BWallace1980(at)hotmail(d0t)com
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ReplyDeleteInteresting question. The answer is yes and no. The characters are certainly fictitious but a lot of their traits are based on people I know, including myself. And I answer this question in more depth in my interview on 2/18. Thanks!
Thanks so much for everything, E.L.F. I've enjoyed the interactions and questions. This has been fabulous! Nanette
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DeleteIt has been great hearing about your book and although I am not the reader myself, my 2 sisters and 2 daughters are. They love hearing about the genre's they like and me helping them get to find books they will enjoy. Thanks for sharing!
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DeleteI love those eureka moments.
ReplyDeletesherry @ fundinmental
Those make great pivotal moments! Thanks for dropping in, Sherry!
DeleteThat's awesome that you were able to go after what you wanted.
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